Wow! This is great! Love the dark atmosphere you've set up. Update soon!

interesting

You changed it a lot but I think I like the new version better. But this is just great! I love what you have so far and you have to update!

this story is positively brilliant.

Great story! Update!

stupid fictionpress wouldn't let me review yesterday . . . as i told you before, i love the idea of the bar being in an abandoned church, you set the mood perfectly. Yay for updates! I'm glad you decided to bring this story back, you're doing a bang up job!--R

Hey girl, sorry i'm not signing in, but i can't remember my login. Eitherway, your writing really is very very good, and truth be told I am impressed. Thanks for making me feel untalented Em. Really tahnks. =P

on the whole, good work. I'll follow this story as you put thought to digital paper ^_^

peace girl.Ken

Hey there... it's xdeathofseasonsxx from DeviantArt... and I just finished reading this. So far, I'm enjoying it. It's got that whole Greek/Roman mythology vibe, which is cool. I don't have time to read the next chapter yet, but I will soon...

Happy New Years!

-xxSammy

I like the names you have particularly chosen in your fiction. Pretty funky.

Am a bit puzzled by your dialogue because I personally feel that in a fantasy type novel, people won't really swear like in the real world.

Uh, description wise, not too bad, but I think more vivid would be prefered.

Good job. Keep writing.

*If you're into ghosthunting and supernatural stuff, check out my fiction: Reapers*

HOORAY FOR REVAMPING!let jealousy of your great writing skills ensue *jealousy*i love your style, it's so grown upalready i'm thinking of this like it's a moviecontinue with the good stuff, my fellow pirate!-R

Fabulous beginning . . . I see there is only 1 more chapter tho! Am i going to have to start harassing you to write more?
thank you for introducing me to your profile page! i look forward to reading more of your work!
-R

wow, this writing is astounding. from the very start, your expansive word choice, intrigue in every sentence, i could see the words on the page of a published book. i could see the scenes and the people play out in my mind's eye. this is amazing stuff! can't wait to see what's next, of course. = D

How in the name of heaven do you come up with this stuff? Really, how?
Continue! Or I'll turn Turnip against you! (Though I doubt I could.)

WAI! This is awesome! Please continue!