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| suicidal-greeting 2005-04-01 ch 1,   | You can fly with me whenever you wishNo matter what gender, I welcome you bothI will help you spread your wings whenever you needAnd no matter what people say, please never lose hope! Much Love-->Suicidal_Greeting |
| x barerie x 2005-03-22 ch 1, | very good. you did well to express the emotions of the "valueless girl." all of us girls, I think, feel this at one point or another, and you created that feeling of rememberance. |
| Haz Almighty 2004-07-08 ch 1, | I really like this, it also speaks alot of truth. Keep going x Haz almighty x |
| RandomGoth 2004-06-02 ch 1, | Oh hunni, :'( what a powerful peice of writing that so many of us one feels could relate easily to. Rememeber always you are not alone, there are many others in similar situations who are there for you. Keep smiling. I love the way you manage to subtly rhyme your poetry so that it is not immediatly obvious but helps the poem to flow, this is a real talent that you use to great effect. God bless! Yours in randomness! RG |
| Arlynael 2004-05-23 ch 1, | A well-written poem, though I'm not good at judging poetry. I love your rhymes. They're clever. |
| FlogThatWeasel 2004-04-22 ch 1, | :`( and yet again, :) This is far better than I could ever do. |
| ExiledRain 2004-04-19 ch 1, | Beautiful, wonderful work! |