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Reviews For: Lonliness Bad Friends Don't Count
sarah1491 2006-01-30 . chapter 1
Oh, nice message. The rhyming seems a bit stressed though. you use the word "competes" a lot too.
Aquarius Starlight 2004-04-20 . chapter 1
very true! good observations!!
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