Ah Eddy A. Poe. Could it be by mere chance that you chose the pen name Poe? I think not. Your work mirrors his. I believe that's the best compliment to his work. I adore Poe. This is so beautiful and well written. I remain impressed.

I like this story!! it is very sad at the end though :( great job!

That was honestly the greatest poem i have ever read. I have no doubt that that could be published and sold and you could be famous for that. It was amazingly touching and deep. I loved it