|Reviews for Forgive Me|
| shadowedbutterfly 4/19/04 . chapter 1
i really like this, so much emotion..the words you choose are just right, well done!
| Angel Snowson 4/19/04 . chapter 1
Interesting. Promises of forever are always tricky to keep. Since everything changes, thus how can we say forever? Hope to see more works.
| wierdlilazn 4/19/04 . chapter 1
I think that your consistent use of Forgive me really placed more emphasis onto the reader and blended in very well with this written piece. I hope you this person does forgive you and forgive you for the pain you might have caused. Nicely done ]
| Steel Winged Angel 4/19/04 . chapter 1
How hard it is to ask for forgiveness. It can be so painful hurting others. You did a wonderful job with this piece. I really like it. The repetition of "forgive me" works very well.