i really like this, so much emotion..the words you choose are just right, well done!

Interesting. Promises of forever are always tricky to keep. Since everything changes, thus how can we say forever? Hope to see more works.

I think that your consistent use of Forgive me really placed more emphasis onto the reader and blended in very well with this written piece. I hope you this person does forgive you and forgive you for the pain you might have caused. Nicely done ]

How hard it is to ask for forgiveness. It can be so painful hurting others. You did a wonderful job with this piece. I really like it. The repetition of "forgive me" works very well.