Whe, I wish I could do that to some people...*cough* CJ *cough* anyways, same as all the others of yours, this poem rocks!

ooh, angsty. it would be better if u got some spell check...0)

okay, i admit, that was probably one of ur better ones so far creepy description keep it up

I really like this poem...and to respond to what you said to me in your review: You are a good writer! I've been writing all my life and its my goal to someday write for something that I enjoy. Im flattered that you think that I am good..but I am really really jelous that you can rhyme efficiently and I CANT! That is my weak spot...so in a way, we both envy our different skills...the grass is always greener on the other side ;)...Im gonna add you to my favorites and I would be happy to review things back and forth :) Great job on your poem btw! Love the rhyming words you were able to fit together!
-Britt