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leadlesspencil 2004-07-04 . chapter 1
I was struggling to sleep some night ago in bed, when I tried to write a haiku. o.o;; Now I know it's a lot harder than it looks, and you wrote a good one.
aspiring author 2004-06-14 . chapter 1
yes this is really me, I'm just too lazy to log on and we have a final in a half hour.
Love it!
I'm a friend of Earthsong12, please review my stories!
Bye, gotta study,
aspiring author
Lauren K 2004-04-29 . chapter 1
good-actually made sense...some haikus seem to be more concerned with number of syllables, like
the night is so dark
I really like shiny stars
and weep out my soul.
Sorry...first thing that came to mind-anyway, I liked it! One thing (nothing to do with actual writing) is that it's easier to read when there's more than one haiku at a time, even if they're totally unrelated so it's not like BEGINNING whoa it ended. Sorry, that's just me maybe.
~(rambling) Kiara
High Sky 2004-04-21 . chapter 1
it is very easy to do haiku, but rather difficult to do GOOD haiku. this is some good haiku. thanx for all the reviews :)
Spoonvonstup 2004-04-20 . chapter 1
hm... ^_^ Yes. Yes I did. i have no idea why I didn't catch that. thanks. I'll change it when get back from school.
Carcilwen Thorned-Rose 2004-04-20 . chapter 1
Very nice.
Earthsong12 2004-04-20 . chapter 1
Hey spooni, this is really cool. I think you mean ”disillusioned” on the first line. Hey, was your wish to find the disk? Good luck on that. And good job!
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