You're so good at making the reader feel as if they are in the story with your imagery. And the emotion you put in this is fantabulous! Good job!

Autty, you write so very well! This made me cry, and you know that it's always a good thing when you can make people feel when they read your work. Love you Autumn!*~Luna~*

hm.. an often repeated plot. but the poem adds a novelty to it :-d
abhi

A very touching story. Quite unexpected. Keep it up. :]