you're not pathetic, autumn. The story was a little sad, but your use of imagery was amazing! I felt like I was actually there. Keep writing!

o ur not completely pathetic autumn, i'm reviewing ur story aren't i? :P
its not bad... its just kinda so/so, i mean, a poor six year old girl gets killed w/ a pink lawn flamingo? thats so sad :( but the reference to peppermint stix was rather funny

Hey, look at me! I'm so pathetic, I'm reviewing my own story! Nobody else will! It's not that bad, is it? I think it's okay...sort of sad, but okay...I like it! God I'm pathetic...