|Reviews for Thoughts of Fear|
| Kriss-C 9/1/04 . chapter 1
Thats so beautifully written!
| Matt Alan 5/24/04 . chapter 1
I know the fear sorry dude...But this is good
| FELICIA-SPENCER 4/20/04 . chapter 1
Aw really this is so sweet. Sometimes all you can be is patient, especially when your feelings are involved. If your patient enough then maybe the girl, or in my case guy will come around. They will come to realize that they let a good thing go, and then hopefully they'll come back. OK...I'm through trying to sound like Dr. Phil or Oprah. I'll leave ya alone now, but first I wanted to say this was a wonderful poem, and it really made me re-evaluate some things that I'm going through. Great Job. TTFN.
| AmethystTrish 4/20/04 . chapter 1
another good one. short, but it gets the feeling across. great job!
| Glennesque 4/20/04 . chapter 1
heartfelt, I know how yo feel on that front. I like the rhyming in the last stanzer, though i don't think it works as well in the middle, maybe a few too many syllable(only my opinion though). Keep it up
| Arreis Kurai 4/20/04 . chapter 1
except in your first stanza, your rhymes are consistent and well thought out... perhaps try to rhyme the first stanza better 'cause it seems a bit out of place...other that that, i love the poem, and the idea behind it