Reviews for A History of Mekodo

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Autoro 2007-01-14 ch 5,	abuseCapys seems to be lowering the urgency of his arguemnt:"cannot, nay should not". Also, there's only a thousand humans. If the elves have been living here for thousands of years, surely they have a large enough population to handle such a small number, especially since they have magic on their side.
Autoro 2007-01-14 ch 6,	abuseThis chapter mostly is good, but one mistake: Who is Anna? Did you change her name in earlier chapters, and forget to do so here?
Autoro 2007-01-14 ch 4,	abuseAt the very end, Trenelus hasn't told Praedita what happened. Is she just happy that he was summoned by the council, or what?
Autoro 2007-01-14 ch 2,	abuseMajor problem! They're going from intergalactic spaceships, to swords and bows, in 589 years. And then they're going from swords and bows to nuclear bombs and intersteller spaceships in 14 years! This is simply not possible. Maybe I'm misinterperting "medieval-type war", but it still doesn't make much sense to me.
earthie 2005-02-06 ch 6, anon.	abusehey, this is very cool! I like the latin. One thing: it’s ”grammar,” not “grammer”. not a huge thing. yay for updatez! (that was a typo but i decided to keep it. ^_^)
earthsong12 2005-02-03 ch 5, anon.	abuseokay, you were bugging me today to review this chappie but i already did, so :-P. You should pay more attention to your reviews! ~_^ (and if you can't figure out that I'm earthie, then...i won't continue, b/c i'd get slapped, but you can guess what i mean. ^_^) ANYway, this is good, yadda yadda, in some paragraph you put "a" instead of "and". I can't find it now, but i know it's there somewhere. ~_^ but since i pointed out a typo in my last review and it remains unfixed, i don't know why i even bother...oh, right, cause i don't reaview you hit me! beam me smart...i'm going to bed now, goodnight. And hope you enjoyed the longest review i've ever given you! ^_^ú
earthie 2004-12-25 ch 5, anon.	abuseFido won't let me review this signed. Grr.. This is good. I'm glad they picked the third option; it was really the only smart and humane (elven?) option. One small typo: thirteenth paragraph, you have "we to them a compassionate face." I assume you meant "we show." I forget where you are right now - are you at the lake? Wherever, hope you're having a nice break. Email me if you can please, though I might not reply for a bit. This is a great story, write more soon! i really ought to work more on my stories...-_- shamep
Elenbarathi 2004-12-20 ch 1,	abuseI read the first chapter, and noticed a big resemblance between the foreign/elven words and Tolkien's words of that sort. I looked at your bio and what did I find? You got it. "ALL ELVEN/ELVISH WORDS ARE BORROWED FROM "THE LANGUAGES OF TOLKEN'S MIDDLE EARTH"'S ENGLISH-TO-ELVISH DICTIONARY...THEY ARE NOT MY OWN." There we go.Anyway, this sounds pretty interesting, and even though I haven't read the next five chapters, I'm sure they will be great.
Aspiring Author 2004-10-05 ch 4,	abuseI forgot to hit the little button to add you to my alerts list, so I'm reviewing again so I can hit it. Sorry! Oh! And also fav. authors!
Aspiring Author 2004-10-05 ch 5,	abuseI like, I like! singsongy. I also read your bio, and I also will put you on author alerts. Are you continuing this story or not? I can't remember what you said. Read "Storytime in Foursquare 2" before anything else, it's that one we wrote! I have to go but I'll read the rest of your stuff at a later date, 'k? ~aspiring author
Ancamna 2004-06-17 ch 4,	abuseThis is really good! I can't wait to see what happens! What're the elves going to do with the unsuspecting humans? ^_^
Simple Enigma 2004-06-09 ch 1,	abusethis reminds me of the silmirllian! you sound like Tolkien (the ultimate compliment) Keep it up!
ladylore 2004-06-03 ch 4,	abuseI am loving this! You are amazing! Please r+r me x
Earthsong12 2004-06-02 ch 5,	abuseHey, sul, I have some stuff to tell you. First, what is with that "hurhurhur" thing? No one laughs like that! Are you just doing that to bug me? 2nd, you got a spelling mistake in your bio-it's hypocrite. 3rd, it's kinda weird if you say your own stories are great...yah. Rereading this, I realize I sound kinda mean. Sorry! I'm not trying to be. I do like your stories. Oh, and I hope you don't mean you're your own least favorite thing? Cause that's not good! You should love yourself, and all that stuff. OK, I'm shutting up now. Bye! ^_^
Spoonvonstup 2004-05-25 ch 5,	abuseo...very very helpful. ^_^ How in hadey who were you able to upload the character in Noleon? Oh well..magic or fabulousness I suppose. Hm...yay for characters again! A good improvement. All I might say is that the council meeting seemed extremely short for a danger of the kind that the humans seem...and not very much panicing.. have elves discovered what humans never could? The ability to not 'freak out' and the slightest itty bitty thing? At any rate, they just seemed remarkably calm to me. Oh? An invading force is coming? Ho dee hum.. I guess we shall have to kill them. It shall be interesting to see what millenias of evolution has changed elven society..or at least weaponry and techniques..as compared to the humans' :let's blow everything up! I wonder, will there be any dissention about going to war? Or just..dissention because people are bound to be uppity just because they can. And will any of the humans prove to actually care about things other than themselves, or merely fit into an evil steretype? It should be interesting!

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