I'm enjoying this story and I don't feel you've rushed the sex as you're actually skipping a large piece of time between chapters which helps move the story forward without bogging us down with details we don't need. keep writing

Another good chapter; I'll be pleased to see where this story goes. I like Sera as a character, how she's not perfect and a sort of artsy type. I also like Steve, and I want to see how they will end up in the end.
Write on!
~LC~

I think that this was a great start to this story. I do not usually read contemporary fiction, but this story sounded good so I figured I'd give it a shot. Please keep writing!
~Lady Cyann~

they love each other so i guess why not. lol great chapter. i love how you write...its so vivid and beautiful. i was just wondering why certain words are underlined lol. update soon.

finally a date. i cant wait to learn more about the characters and see how they both react on the date. update soon and good luck on your AP test lol.

cool story. please write more

very cute. a few syntactical errors and misspells, but nice fuzzy feelings overall. I can commiserate about the AP test, i have one tomorrow. Good luck.

good next chapter. the little things like her touching his hand were so cute. keep it up and update soon.

Oh... Steve's falling for Sera! ^.^ Goody! I love it I love it I love it! Update? ^.^
~Necchan

Hehe... Steve sounds *hott*. ^.^ Nice job, Gina! Very loverly and cuteful! ^.^ Continue yay!
~Necchan

Yeah, I know what you mean about there being no natives, although i did meet some at the southernmost point. the story is nice b/c of the vacation vibe; i wanna go back to Key West *whines and pulls a pout*, but this is a pretty good substitute. Anyways, keep updating, it's nice to find a nice, non-domineering guy for the main character, it doesn't happen too often. cheerio.

aw its cute. i like the artist and the tropical setting. update soon and please read my stories.

Well done. I like the character interaction. This is very well done. I’d like to invite you to a writing forum. I hope you enjoy the community and share some of your interesting works.
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Ahh.. very cute. I guess it does have some sort of cliché in it. But cliché can be a good thing, and what story isn't cliché? Hah, anyway, hope I haven’t confused you already. I've got time, and since you're just starting this story, I’ve decided to write you a nice long inspiring review. ^__^
Ok, first off, I like you you've got your characters nailed down. Obviously Sera is your heroine, and I’m guessing Steve is your hero? Hah, cute. The conversation between the two was exceptionally good, I couldn’t help but notice. It was very life like, and not unrealistic. Usually, in many stories, I see authors who make first time acquaintances act as if they’ve known each other for forever. I guess it could happen, but it’s highly unlikely.
*Smiles* Good, you have some sort of inspiration, and aren’t writing just to get a handful of reviews. I like that. Writers need motivation, *high five* good for you!
Well, there’s only been one chapter, and I’m sure I’ve bored the heck out of you by now. ^__^ Lovely story sweetie, update soon!
~Fallen Fantasist

I really like it. Please continue soon!