Very nice. I enjoyed reading this. Gave me chills.

The suspense builds nicely, and you get a sort of creepy feeling even in the first quatrain.
Great work!

creepy! very nice!! thanx for all the reviews!

lol! I like it. It IS scary AND funny. hehe. Nice job. Good imagery and rhymes, they flow very well.
Closening, eh? lol! Heres to made up words! YAY! I knew what you meant and thats all that counts, right? Of course!
Thumbs!
Arrivederci!
-Terra Tigra-