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| Zeekie 2004-09-02 ch 1, | this one's also really melodic...i love how you put in some rhyming and the whole metaphor of the poem is really gr8 |
| Nay and Ayeka 2004-04-21 ch 1, | beautiful poem! u know im really surprised that no one else reviews ur poems because they're spectacular! i love it and the rhyming goes so well with the poem...most people force rhyming but u do it so well! nice job and i cant wait for u to write another poem! |