COOL! so ur assignment was about the Underground Railroud. i encourage you to post more of these assignments. it'd be great, if you put it in a long story form. :D

Really good, love how you protray the character Dahlia. Nothing bad about it really except, would a person talk like that back then? Not counting the chillun and such but-yeah. really good!

This is a great story. :). Very inspiring.