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| butterflydreaming 2004-04-25 ch 1,   | Actually, I think this is rather good. The metaphor is interesting, since a mirror reflects oneself. A child sees the world as a place of innocence, the way the child himself is. |
| Frozen Inside 2004-04-20 ch 1, | I like it. Maybe Im just not a good reviewer... but I liked the whole idea, and Ive experienced it. Dont really like the end tho. NeA |
| driel 2004-04-20 ch 1, | the form of teh poem is not great (not bad either) but the content more than makes up for it... I like it |