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| LiMay 2007-11-02 ch 1,  | abuseaaww... Love the last sentence x) Cute ending. Your stories are all so cute and funny! You're really original! Great one! |
| Frore 2006-04-06 ch 1, | abuseHaha, poptarts are the **. As usual, your work amazes me, and I truly enjoyed reading this story. |
| Broken doll on a dirty shel... 2005-10-31 ch 1, | abuseI think I stumbled upon you from looking through The Watched's favorites list...and I scrolled through everything and thought 'holy **, talent'! You have a load of works that I plan on readings, this one just really grabbed my attention. An excellent piece I must say. And the fathers ramble on loving your male friend, you did an excellent job here. Fantastic! Harlequin~Please fix me... |
| The Watched 2005-09-21 ch 1, | abuseAw...it's kind of a shame Mike is straight, since they would be so VERY CUTE together. But I feel I'm in some way desecrating your writing with my rambling teenie **, so I'll stop now... |
| strawberries'n'sugar 2005-08-23 ch 1, | abuseHa, this is funny. Made me laugh anyway. Kinda subtly amazing. Although, poor Mike. And poor other guy too. Great writing, B. |
| do not resuscitate 2005-06-22 ch 1, | abuseyou handled the sadness of this piece perfectly. so many people try to write about sexuality and eating disorders, it's become rather tired. but this was still so original, you have a lot of talent. |
| Ellie 2004-08-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseBittersweet. *sniff* I've been meaning to review this forever and I just now got around to it. I love the last paragraph. |
| AnotherDumbBrunette 2004-05-18 ch 1, anon. | abusePerfect. That's exactly what would have happened! You are a hell a talented writer, especially for being so young! |
| CW-nerd-12 2004-04-23 ch 1, | abuseAw, poor Mike, no wonder he's so messed up :~( You going to update Identity Disturbance any time soon? |
| Saena 2004-04-21 ch 1, | abuseYou know, I really like this. I think the part of it I really enjoyed were the character's perspectives, their "voice", which seemed really unique- especially for Alex. Some of the things that he commented on seemed kind of abstract- like the thing about him missing his pop tart. :) It was like it came out of nowhere, but then again, it didn't. If you know what I mean. It was cool, and I'm glad I read it. Nice job. |
| ChickenRun 2004-04-20 ch 1, | abuseThere were parts of this I absolutely dispised. Murder, suicide, eating disorders, sexuality in crisis... But there were parts of it I loved. Like most of it. looking back at the piece as a whole, I thoughroughly enjoyed it. I especially loved the final paragraphs, the two long ones. I haven't read your novel attempt, but I'm going to now. Keep it up! X |