i loved the language you used in this piece. it was short, but got the point across. great job, i loved it.

i like this very much but not everything in the mirror is meaningless
look for the person on the inside and not onthe out

Good work...hopefully not too many people can relate to this...you know what they say...love thyself.

nice job. i like how there is truth in it, and some people i know can relate.
not to be mean or anything, but i think that the last line, or just the word 'creature' has a blunt ending. all the other words sound great like 'partake, and avert'. perhaps another word might sound better... )