|Reviews for Reflection|
| do not resuscitate 8/25/04 . chapter 1
i loved the language you used in this piece. it was short, but got the point across. great job, i loved it.
| The holy One 5/30/04 . chapter 1
i like this very much but not everything in the mirror is meaningless
look for the person on the inside and not onthe out
| wammes 5/9/04 . chapter 1
Good work...hopefully not too many people can relate to this...you know what they say...love thyself.
| Amara Ryden 4/26/04 . chapter 1
nice job. i like how there is truth in it, and some people i know can relate.
not to be mean or anything, but i think that the last line, or just the word 'creature' has a blunt ending. all the other words sound great like 'partake, and avert'. perhaps another word might sound better... )