I guess these are the things that will be etched in your memory forever, no matter how much you try...very sorrowful and melancholy poem with a generous drop of excellence. :)

you should review some of the poems in the 'just in' right now cuz a lot have been about what you're writing about, I've read them all. Beats me how you all can write about the same stuff so differently, each with their own unique, beautiful voice. :O) Great job!
Review me if you're free!
summerdazed