i liked this one too...it reminded me sort of more along the lines of a song sort of thing...hm that'd make a really good song actually...lol ok kinda random, but w/e

omg this rocked!! i love this!! excellent work!

well, thanks to this poem, i'm just a little depressed now =) jk. You did a great job. I'm not sure if what you were trying to convay here was jealousy or remorse. i, again have gone though some very simmilar crap. You express it very well. Great job
~me

I can really relate to this. It's great