It is truly wonderful to be held by someone and have all your fears go away and forget everything that was bothering you. I completely understand. It is so hard to want someone to hold you and in your mind you beg them to but they might not. (sorry i rambled)

In my interpretation you think you understand the sunject of this poem until the line "hold onto me so I don't, fly away, please" You start to think here that the subject is likly to cheat. It leaves you thinking alot, great poem. I dont know if that was what you were going for. Good luck in all your work
Nine Iron

Not your best work, but still good. I like how the last line is set apart from the rest.

I'm glad you were able to post 3 more poems. This one is ok. Not among my favorites but still pretty good.
keep writing
till-iburnout