Touching, creative.

I really like how you composed this poem. It really makes me picture a tropical paradise somewhere far away.

I love how you wrote this. It's almost like you were discribeing paradise. I'm putting this one in the favorite.
-Shastel
PS. Thanks for putting me in your favorite authors box, much apriciated. : )

Absolutely.
I like how the rhyme scheme in the last stanza calls attention to the advice.

Lovely piece. It's very descrpitive. I love the picture that springs to mind reading this. Excellent.