Well I quite enjoyed your poem... after I figured out what I meant... extensive vocab ... and although I'm glad you do it, in a way, took aaway from the actual poem, because I have to keep thinking, 'now, what does that word mean.' Eh, so I don't have a enormous vocab, I doubt most have one like you. Sorry if I sounded harsh, I'm just trying to help. Although I would love to read your other poems.
- misplaced Vision

wow, lots of difficult vocabulary! awesome~~ i might have to check up in the dictionary^^ my vocab bad... but, if gives a sorta, confusing image, which is reli good^^ keep up the good work!
~Never the same~

wow.. very powerful

wow..very interesting writing style, great vocabulary