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| scaryperson42 2005-03-22 ch 1, | This was excellent |
| KittyGurl 2004-10-07 ch 1, | *girl with cat ears and tail appears *KG: This is great! Even my alter ego agrees! *girl with fox ears and tail a.k.a. FoxyGurl appears* FG: Hey! Who said you could speak for me??!! KG: You're my alter ego. KG&FG: This is great! Keep on updating! FG: StoryGurl? Do I know you?? Anyway, I'm not a bonehead, though I wouldn't know about KittyGurl. KG: HEY! Goodbye, and UPDATE! *clicks review button* |
| KittyGurl 2004-10-07 ch 1, | *girl with cat ears and tail appears *KG: This is great! Even my alter ego agrees! *girl with fox ears and tail a.k.a. FoxyGurl appears* FG: Hey! Who said you could speak for me??!! KG: You're my alter ego. KG&FG: This is great! Keep on updating! FG: StoryGurl? Do I know you?? Anyway, I'm not a bonehead, though I wouldn't know about KittyGurl. KG: HEY! Goodbye, and UPDATE! *clicks review button* |
| StoryGurl 2004-08-10 ch 8, | This eighth chapter is great! I cannot wait till the ninth! Please forgive Ali. She is extremly violent to me and Sushi.(Yes I know her, and yes Sushi is a real cat. (but we don't attack her with frying pans)*glares at Ali* and yes Ali is my sister) |
| Ali 2004-08-09 ch 8, | Ali:This is a great story! *cat pokes head out of backpack* Cat a.k.a. Sushi:You know she has bookmarked this story on her favorites. Ali: Sushi... *pulls frying pan out of backpack, Sushi is on the ground* Ali: SUSHI. YOU. TOOK. MY. LINE! *starts hitting Sushi with frying pan* Sushi: Ow, Hey that hurts! Hey look she updated! There is now an Occasion 9! *Ali rushes to computer* Ali: Where? Where? Let me read! *Sushi slinks off* Sushi(from some hidden place):Now Staris, I Sushi commander of the cats command you, an artistic human to write more! *Ali sneaks up behind Sushi, a demonic glint in her eyes and the frying pan in her hand* Sushi: HEY! OW! THAT HURTS! ...Censored for violence... Ali: Ha! I am victorious! Any way, Staris your writing is good and StoryGurl was right, again, to reccomned U to me. Great story so far. Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. Please make it funny. *pleading look* Bye, bye! |
| StoryGurl 2004-07-25 ch 7, | this is great,so WHY DON'T YOU WRITE MORE?? Just forget that the other bone heads who are reading this story forgot to review(no not you enterwonderland) To the Boneheads: START REVIEW YOU JERKS THIS WRITER MIGHT LOOSE HER CONFIDENCE! |
| EnterWonderland 2004-07-12 ch 2, | Yay! I finally got around to finishing Occassion Two... 'bout time... Now I can leave you a REAL review... so anyway- I like the pace that the story is going at, though when you introduce characters its a teensy bit confusing... but you clear it up later, so its fine. Favorite character so far is Ginger... I'm sad she wasn't in this chapter ~^.^~ Least favorite character is Lexus... but that's because he's a perv and he likes to fight alot... oh, wait! Scratch that, pervs and fighters are always on my fav list! HAHAHA!! So yeah, the story is going well so far, I'd like to see more of the Fairy Kingdom stuff... I'll keep reading on... hm... Do they have little fairy wings that pop out when they're stressed? I wonder... OH yeah, did you get the picture I sent you? Just curious if you liked it or not, chow Staris, talk to ya soon! --Tokyo Shorty |
| EnterWonderland 2004-06-25 ch 1, | I'm starting to read your story, but I haven't read enough to leave a good review yet, just wanted to let you know that you eligible (since you reviewed my story "Kamikaze Damasu: Kiri") to get a picture that I drew of them... but I don't have your e-mail... do you want it? (wonderlandfiction@yahoo.com) --Tokyo Shorty from Enterwonderland |