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Reviews For: Pirates of the Edelweiss

OldJoe
2004-05-08
ch 1,
This is really good, but you should put a little more detail in and break it into seperate chapters.
ElasStar
2004-04-23
ch 1,
This was a very nice piece. The only thing that could be better was how fast everyone died. If they hadnt all died or ifthey died in a cross fire or something it would be less rapid.
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