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| bbyxhann 2008-11-03 ch 30,  | great job ! freakkin' love this story . [: hurry &update ! [: |
| AMM3485 2008-09-25 ch 30,  | Loving it! Can't wait for another update. |
| JustAnotherLibroLover 2008-09-23 ch 30, | Doomed... DOMED! hee hee, yay for updates! luv it! |
| crazychic7278 2008-09-22 ch 30, | yay...a update...did another good job...on it...again...haha keep it up |
| bbyxhann 2008-09-22 ch 14, | i thought the ending was hilarious . but i think that girl might be bala . well its not really of a think , its more of a duhh of course . lol . >. |
| bbyxhann 2008-09-22 ch 12, | aww , i think theyre so cute together ! plus he & bala already think that totonia & curtis should be together . |
| bbyxhann 2008-09-22 ch 6, | whoaa , shes a vampire . why'd it take so long ? |
| bbyxhann 2008-09-22 ch 5, | aww , she might be dead ? that sux . |
| bbyxhann 2008-09-22 ch 4, | wow , so far great story . at first when totonia came in the story , i thought she was gonna be some beetch whos protective over he ex . apparently im wrong , nd shes just trying to look out for her . well great job ! [: |
| crazychic7278 2008-08-05 ch 29, | what awesome story... |
| JustAnotherLibroLover 2008-06-30 ch 29, | YAY! I was wondering when ya would continue on! It has been on my list forever, and I just kept saying to myself "Don't worry, it'll be updated soon!" and look, it was! I love this one, and can't wait for the next chapter! |
| Oooh.Look.A Cat 2008-06-29 ch 29, | thanks for those extra gory details haha well they're not exactly the most gory-est but they're pretty gory ..i have to stop saying that. bala and vince seem to be...getting along a lot better anyway, can't wait for the next one izzie |
| AMM3485 2008-06-29 ch 29, | Great chapter. Loving Vince's new power it's great! Can't wait until the new chapter. |
| AMM3485 2008-05-31 ch 28, | I will admit I was really iffy about this story in the beginning. I really don't like skipping a huge amount of time for the characters, but after Travis and Drake were kidnapped, I got sucked back into it again. I love the dynamic between Vince and Bala. They are incredible characters. I love Hide as the comic relief, Curtis as well. I hope you update soon. Nice job so far! |
| sousie 2008-03-28 ch 28, | update soon and keep it up |