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| Bleeding 2004-05-16 ch 1, | ... ... |
| imxnotxyourxstar 2004-04-21 ch 1, | Wonderfully written, I loved the title. I liked where it went, "I wish you knew that how I cry, Is not with sobs or tears, But by pressing the blade into my skin, And bleeding out all my fears." Powerful lines, they ended the poem perfectly. Keep up thhe great work! ~Lsay312 |