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| Amarant Rose Coral 2007-08-24 ch 1,   | Wonderful written. Your really talented. Really good job! |
| Anjeni Windsinger 2004-06-09 ch 1, | haunting. that's all i can say to this. the chorus is very well done, especially the bit about defying stars. wonderful write once again! |
| CoolBeans18s 2004-05-28 ch 1, | Wow... this was amazing. So tragically bittersweet... (I like that you matched the beat. I could really hear this being sung! They make good lyrics!) ~ CoolBeans18s |
| aiur 2004-04-22 ch 1, | love the way your beats match "my immortal"; that's really creative, and i know firsthand how hard it is to do. and also, it didn't undermine your meaning in the least. you had beautiful lyrics, that flowed well, and were really true and deep. kudos to you!! ~k8 |
| biblehermione 2004-04-22 ch 1, | Great. There area lot of people I know who fit this song perfectly. |
| Wasted Postage 2004-04-22 ch 1, | Wow. This was just astounding. It wasn't tragically beautiful, but more like tragically sweet. It was full of deep concern. I'm just at a loss for words, my friend. ~*~AbunaiChikara |