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Damn. I haven't seen any of your narative writing in such a long time. And now it's all so GOOD and...publishable. Actually sorta reminds me of a cop show...but then I've watched far too many of those recently...
Needless to say, I like...

Wow- thats all I can say. That would be so weird if that happened to you...very different. Great job

you're god, and officially i am your bitch now. that story is amazing i swear to god. if i wasn't your other half i would be jealous.

Interesting, fairly well-written. But, I felt you could have done more with it; it was pretty brief. I say this in every review, but I am a firm believer in detail as the meat of a short story - especially one with a creepy premise like this.
Thanks!
-VVL