i really can't believe that you're story is not very popular. this is the best story i have every read. i reread your story three times already and i'm doing the fourth.
you might not be able to read this but whatever.

dang are you going to publish this? My sister Rebekah said you might. i think you talk to her well any way i love reading these stories their awsome!

... OO wow... I am overwhelmed with your brilliant writing skills and that mind of yours!! I cried so badly when Lethya died and all it was heart wrenching, I stopped after I realised she had come back to life. Any emotion she feels, I kind of feel too... I like

im gonna have to continue this tomorrow :D

Yea! Ander finally saw evil Laise, and choose Lethya. Tyra and Jerik should be the next couple. I love the both of them!

i love love love this series so far. youve done an amazing job and i cant help but wonder when Lethya's sister (laise?) will appear. omg will they think its Lethya...

LOve this Story

Eh, I forgot to add it to my favourites list.

I have got to admit, you are ingenious! Really, have you got this story published? You'd do incredibly well. You've mastered the characters and you've explained pretty much everything. I love the plot and can't wait to see what's going to happen next.

Okay. Done. I was wondering to myself, “What is the heart of this story?” Is it the characters, the plot, or the writing style? Ugh, I’ll sleep on it. Anyway, the tension is still there. The 3rd time I’m reading this (back that truck up, I must keep reminding myself that this is the first time!) and I still get frustrated with the whole LethyaXAnder situation. That’s saying something, right? FUSTRATION is definitely the word, and I know more is coming ~_~
Other than that, I guess my only beef is the lack of fluff…but that’s how the story goes, right? Deep down, I guess I wouldn’t have it any other way ^_^
The main characters are developing nicely, we need them to get out of their shells, but it’s happening. Like how Tyra reveals there’s more to Jerik, or Ander’s little moments of angst-ridden thought. I feel Tyra needs to be fleshed out more, but that comes later ne? I know I’m skipping ahead, but The Styx scene was one of my favs! I hope its still there….
Ah, and Lethya. I have mixed feelings on this one. She’s so…human, in the way her insecurities sometimes conquers her, and yet she appears immortal, because she escaped death itself. Hmm. Yeah, she’s okay. I saw your sketches, and they’re kinda what I had in mind, the clothes I mean. Very nice.
And so, the third book ends. More pain to come…and then…er…I forgot, which is good, cause then I won’t be biased, but I remember the ending! Now who could forget the ending?!?! Hmm. I think I can get another hour and a half, so I’ll get started on Book Three. Ugh, the pain of sharing a computer between four family members…anything else? Ah yes, the triple review thing. Sorry ‘bout that, too use to having something say, “…You can now close this window”. ^_^ NEXT!

Shin'a'nin! *huggles by the sword*. Ahem, I'm okay. Love da story. Love da story. Love da story. I think you get the point...

Hi! I read THe InuYasha TAD first, so of course i had to read this one. The Inu Yasha one had some really funny jokes. But if you put some of them in here not many people would get them. so oh, well! I REALLY like it though. If..WHEN you publish it me and my friends will be the first to buy it. If some stupid publishing company says no to your story tell us (me and Lauren) and we'll super spam and send them blazing hate mate. I've done it before so and i'll do it again.
Just to let you know i only send reviews if i REALLY like. So feel loved.
You'll probably hear from me again so SeeYa!
Shinko
p.s. is Sango.. i mean Tyra gonna have her scythe? I know you said she would so i guess it will show up eventually. bye now for real

You do realize that that's a very highly OFFENSIVE way to end a chapter when IT'S PAST MIDNIGHT AND I HAVE TO GO TO SLEEP!?!?!?!!

*smacks you*

- Gaby

the dragon eye thing is really cute >_< ~~!

i was reading the other version... do u have a "dictionary" ? b/c all the words r different now :pout: but i still love the story