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| FictionPressPenName 2005-10-22 ch 1,   | I'm not sure it's possible to ever truly know someone. Really good poem, great idea, keep writing. |
| Metallic Spica 2005-07-22 ch 1, | Oh well...I guess people don't usually look far beyond the edge of reason, though. ^__^ keep it up! |
| Aryanda 2005-07-20 ch 1, | very intense and beautiful, you could feel the desperation. many people can relate closely to this, nice job. |
| Eirien 2005-07-20 ch 1, | Beautiful and I think a lot of people can relate to this. The poem is very intense in tis expression inspite of its comparative simplicity, that is a really good combination that speaks to the readers' hearts. Well done. |
| Hopeful Light 2005-07-19 ch 1, | To wear a mask is to condemn yourself to a lifetime of pain. This is quite good. |
| AllyCred 2005-03-31 ch 1, | i love it especially "I'd move heaven and earth So you could see, None of the others, Just plain old me."really can identify with this part...i guess becoz all my life i have tried to hide from everyone but when i want people to see me they can't...i love it very well written...so much emotion coming from this. lots of love ~AllyCred~ |
| AlwaysAmberella 2005-03-31 ch 1, | this one is good, but its not my favorite. Still good though keep it up*Lady Solitaire* |
| Untied-From-Love 2005-03-22 ch 1, | i like how you state your point of view in this... you imply that we all wear masks (as i so believe) my fave line out of this poem has to be "look beyond the mask that i now wear, tell me that you understand, and that you care" that is the wish of so many people and you state it so perfectly. |
| Out-Of-Reality 2005-02-12 ch 1, | Sometimes that's all we need... A poem that really made me think. Good stuff |
| Candyluv18 2004-11-02 ch 1, | I really luv this. it had alot of good rhymes and really showed desperation. thumbs up! |
| the murder mystery 2004-06-05 ch 1, | I sometimes feel like this. This poem is actually describing the way I feel right now. |
| Trinka 2004-05-12 ch 1, | *tears* I know how that feels and i know how the longign goes, you conveyed your feelings well in this poem great job, keep it up! |
| Rurien 2004-04-24 ch 1, | It's beautiful... simply too beautiful... |
| Death-By-Papercut 2004-04-22 ch 1, | I know the feeling. I wrote something similar i think you would like...its called "Look Into My Eyes". keep writing. |
| haunted moonlight 2004-04-22 ch 1, | i love this poem, this is something ive felt thousands of times. great job! |