love love love itAsh

great job. i'm not sure if you that's the way destinies is spelled... but this was an amazing poem. you have a gift... keep on using it! and thanks so much for your review of "over your head".

Tres beau, ma cherie! J'adore
Lends truth to the quote: 'you can't see the world through a mirror'
You'll have to read it to me, i'm having problems with the rhythm
(bu then that could be due to the fact that it is half past eleven at night. nice.) :)
I like, and i can see the difference between it and your other work - clearly you and Gaz work well together:)
love
xia x

This was good...really...it was great...I liked it alot...and your talented...hope life is okay for you...
ANNA

wow! great job! i love the last 2 stanza!...great job!!

While the concept behind this poem may seem a little cliche, you have good lines in there that kind of shine through and are almost independent. I absolutly love the line
"My mind has lost its beauty somehow."
and
"My mind was beautiful in its youth."
and also
"It's just beginning, and I'm just a reflection, just a glimmer."
These lines are so good, and they stand out from the poem beautifully.