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| Jonn 2004-04-27 ch 1,  | Beautiful.. I like the allusion to sex, even if it wasnt deliberate it seems somehow appropriate. Sorry for being crass, but i really like it :D it says a lot about you |
| butterflydreaming 2004-04-25 ch 1,  | I'm not sure that the last stanza works, but overall, this has a charming simplicity to it. |