 CCLD-Blade 2004-05-08 . chapter 1*shakes head* I leave fp for nearly a year, come back, and your work is as powerful as it was when I left. This poem just... argh. I love its simplicity, the way that you chose to put the message into such a small package, instead of risking its overexposure in a larger piece. Beautiful. |
 Ultimate Schuyler 2004-04-22 . chapter 1It's so... SAD. ;_; The strange thing is though, is that I can't grasp the connection between God and that man... Is it that we don't visit God enough?
Other than that, it's a very sad haiku. ;_; I just don't get the connection at all, sorry. Do you think you could take a look at my haikus and review them, please? I promise that you'll like them. ^^;; At least, I hope you do.
Keep writing! Ja ne~ |