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| Nails For Your Crucifix 2004-05-24 ch 1, | abuseSad but good. Very nice job. |
| Eagle Seance 2004-05-13 ch 1, | abuseMy friend in my head tells me i'm a loser and should get a life, but that's besides the point. You've expressed yourself 'powerfully' if u know what i mean. the last line intensifies it. Good job. |
| Chloe Carpenter-too lazy to... 2004-05-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseIncredible...I actually wrote a piece rather like this, but I haven't felt like posting it yet...maybe I will tomorrow...it needs fine tuning...very well done, I can understand where this is coming from, as i myself hear voices...god, i'm a nut case... chloe thanks for letting me know that i'm not the only f$%&ing freak in this world who has a 'friend' inside their head... |
| ApplesCM 2004-04-22 ch 1, | abuseI really like this. It really shows how you feel...and how you are trying to fight something (I think...right??) Great job~! Keep writing! |
| SubliminalMsgs (too lazy to... 2004-04-22 ch 1, anon. | abusenice. i know wut u mean. dont give in. it never helps. |
| Shai Ryder 2004-04-22 ch 1, | abuseThe last line is a little unclear... Dieing = dying Otherwise it's really great...I like how it is anti-suicidal =) |