ya! new chapter!! finally

I have to say, I loved this stopry so much thts its on my facorite storie list, and As proclamed Number one Fan of the Virgain of the unicorn I beg that you keep the chapers coming ^^ pretty pretty please with so much suger on the top of icecream?

I LOVE THIS STORY. Holy crap. How is it that you've managed to trap me so completely in this story? I actually just now barely read the last few chapters, even though I haven't read any of it for a few months, this morning I just remembered it and wondered if you'd continued it. It is SO GOOD! Ergh! The drama is killing me, and I'm loving it! Don't you dare take another month to write the next one, or I swear I'll hunt you down. ^_^

Nice little chapter. Nothing to suggest. Keep writing.

For your age, you've quite the imagination. Your story caught my attention from the title to the last words in chapter six. Keep writing!

I'm getting so wrapped up in this story! I love unicorns. But.. Katsy likes Rasia? Why Rasia? Yvette is obviously much cooler, and Rasia is so artificial.

It seems to work out, though... no sinful men can touch her, but it didn't say anything about sinful women. *wicked grin* How exciting.

Ooh, that princess seems nastily manipulative. I'd watch out for her if I were.. what's her name? Katsy?

I love how this is written. The lanugage is all olden-timey and formal, but you manage to make it sound very natural. Bravo!

Yes! This is great, I'm already hooked. You've laid a nice background, and I want to see what's going to happen. I can tell you have a lot of talent; I'm looking forward to this.

A little on the short said, or is that my lil' 'ickle country head has missed the whole point?

I like the premis. You're also very witty. Anyway, I like the character; she is fascinating and think this has a lot of promise.

Your narrator takes herself too seriously and is quite irritating. She's too busy justifying herself to get to the point.

It may be a short chapter but it seems to cover the length and breadth of marriage, relationships, deceit, broken hearts and comfort! Well done. I can't wait to find out whether your heroine is *ever* going to escape from her prison and do more than just look at the world around her.

I love your style! You are so playful with words! I particularly liked, "I was beginning to cast my eye toward the woodcarver’s son, and he was casting right back." Ha! And I am already enjoying Katsy's story. I like the way in which she chides herself for not beginning the story in an "easy to read way". Looking forward to chapter two.
Theresa

i like how this story is going. but in my personal opinion, i think the beginning is just too boring. i don't mean for you to go right to the conflict, but you don't have to drawl it all out and make so dull! don't put any unnecessary things in the beginning, it will make the reader not want to even read the thing at all! so..try to make the beginning more interesting!

I hope you continue with this one! I really really liked it!