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| Thepolia 2004-08-08 ch 1,   | awesome... i wish i could shout these words at my father... |
| pleasecometrue 2004-05-27 ch 1, | Good write, I like it. |
| E A Tetje 2004-05-07 ch 1, | Wow, I ran out of original things to say about your poems for the moment at least. THis is really well written and although for once I don't believe I can relate I love it anyway. Love Ya ~Bethy~ |
| born blue 2004-05-03 ch 1, | oh my gosh... i cried so much reading this... this is fantastic... i love it because its so many of my own thoughts pulled together in a way that i could never say |
| vanderhall 2004-04-24 ch 1, | I love 'for years I'll stare and look without seeing.' this poem is great - you really gave a glimpse into a sad situation. :) ~V~ |
| mmoonsshiner 2004-04-22 ch 1, | look hun youre a good poet and if u ever want anyone to think so u have to be professional not everyone is going to like or be able to realate to everything you write and honestly that poem did ** me off maybe it was the HEY thing .But ne ways that was that poem and this is this. And This poem is great . ive felt the same way so many times its like you read my mind. my fav line is 'For years I’ll stare and look without seeing' i tend to do that alot ...ne ways i hope to see more from you . ~Nat |
| Summerdazed 2004-04-22 ch 1, | wonderful!! =summerdazed= |