awesome...
i wish i could shout these words at my father...

Good write, I like it.

Wow, I ran out of original things to say about your poems for the moment at least. THis is really well written and although for once I don't believe I can relate I love it anyway. Love Ya
~Bethy~

oh my gosh... i cried so much reading this... this is fantastic... i love it because its so many of my own thoughts pulled together in a way that i could never say

I love 'for years I'll stare and look without seeing.' this poem is great - you really gave a glimpse into a sad situation. :) ~V~

look hun youre a good poet and if u ever want anyone to think so u have to be professional not everyone is going to like or be able to realate to everything you write and honestly that poem did ** me off maybe it was the HEY thing .But ne ways that was that poem and this is this.
And This poem is great . ive felt the same way so many times its like you read my mind. my fav line is 'For years I’ll stare and look without seeing' i tend to do that alot ...ne ways i hope to see more from you .
~Nat

wonderful!!
=summerdazed=