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| Summerdazed 2004-06-18 ch 1, | this is very spiritual! especially when you dragged 'sung', there's so much energy in that! And thanks for da fav. vote. ^_^ =summerdazed= |
| End Of The Innocence 2004-05-15 ch 1, | "Lies we live to keep ourselves from going mad Deeds we do just so that we don't feel so bad," are my two favorite lines. It's nice to read lyrics that have actual rythm. Good job. *Briley-Sama* P.S. I stumbled upon your profile when I saw you rated another person's poem on a scale from 1-15. This intreagued me, and (if I'm not siliceting) I hope that that you will one day give a grade on my poetry. You give good constructive critisism. |
| astral boy 2004-04-25 ch 1, | Hello again. :) You have a certain way with words that seems to leave a stain of thought on me after I read your poetry. And this was excellent. Hoorah for you, heh. I can relate to this one in more ways than one, as usual, basically because you covered more than one idea. Very good. Keep writing. I don't know what else to say... so I'll be going now. Thank you for writing. Bye! |
| Ravens Cross 2004-04-23 ch 1, | Wow! Even though I got a bit of a sneak peek of this piece, it still touched me just as much as the first time. This piece contains a great subject, a nice flow, a beautiful poetic talent, and last but not least a brilliant mind behind it all. I think this may be one of the best. You are truly gifted and have a wonderful way of conveying your emotion through poetry. My hats off to you. |
| Nadia20 2004-04-23 ch 1, | Good song. :) You shoud write music to it sometime. |
| Matthew James Current 2004-04-22 ch 1, | Really cool song. At least that's what I would have put it under. It has many good poetic characteristics, too. I enjoyed reading it. Well done. Feel free to stop by and look at some of my work if you wish. Until next we meet, keep on writing and best of luck to you. |