too good...i've officially become a fan of yours

This poem is beautiful!

Deep man good work!

hey- tis me yet again! probably getting sick of my reviews by nowhehe. i just had to say that i really really liked this poem. its amazing how important the simple things can be... and yet the person those feelings are for, sometimes they just don't seem to understand... well, anyways, awesome piece, as always! keep it up!

you love her yet she does not care as much as she leads away or as you want her to...but there is someone someone who really cares for you...lust is powerful but don't let it destroy how far u have come you must remember everything even the bad things...though it may hurt...letting her control you will only hurt more so don't give up...*:)*K.P.

Wow! I can relate to this piece so much! Keep up the fantastic work!
-Anna.
PS- Thanks for reviewing my work!

I want you to get these wonderfully written poemS published. This is really good, and it's so sweet. I am impressed. You shine once again. Great job. TTFN

This is a very sweet poem. I enjoyed reading it very much. R&R some of mine sometimes?