awsome poem...i love your choice of words.

So beautiful, I had to do a mask too for a project, but representing me, anywayz, the rhyming is wonderful and you get your point across with much power and meaning

Great job! I don't know whether to feel angry or sad at the person behind the mask!

Well.. It's not bad.. But I can tell you tried to keep a rhyming pattern, not a rhythm pattern. Don't be mad at me, I used to do it too. Try to keep a steady beat and rhythm, not focus on the rhyming biz. Oh, and you can feel free to flame one of my poems, if ya want.