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Reviews For: Gift of Death

content with rhyme
2004-06-24
ch 1,
Great poem here. But, death isn't the end. There never is an end. We all have judgement to face, and an eternity that awaits.
aqua-angel
2004-05-28
ch 1,
Hm... I used to feel like that. Such depressing stuff, but at least you're letting it out this way rather than some other way. How are you? You feeling okay though? Well, theres always tomorrow. Tomorrow is a good day. If you want it to be a good day, you can. Do it! BE HAPPY! *offers chocolate* mm... chocolate...
Prince of Mirkwood
2004-04-28
ch 1,
nice job! =)
interesting perspective...
Kris 56
2004-04-23
ch 1,
Good poem! Very enjoyable to read, as always...
Neat!
mizu no kokoro
2004-04-23
ch 1,
i guess some plp just have nowhere else to turn~ but, it must take alot for someone to just, give up on life. some plp just write about it, but it never reli does go deep enough. as in some cases, but, death reli is an interesting topic to write about... anywaya, that was a reli expressive poem, i liked it~~ keep up the good work!
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