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| Aijin 2005-03-08 ch 1,   | I like it. It's interesting in a schitzophrenic sense. Well, allow me to reiterate: it speaks as though it's summing up the angst of the many, not just the one. Not an uplifting poem, but the better for it, I think. Asks one to ponder, not to just read and retch, you know? |