Brilliant! Bloody brilliant! Hehe...sorry, I've always wanted to say 'bloody'. ::sticks out tongue::
Hm...this poem reminds me of something I've read before...I'm not sure what... ::thinks::

aanother amazing poem ;)

Oh...this is lovely. You describe this so well, and the visuals are really strong. Thanks for posting this.

such a beautiful poem, and i know exactly how you feel.

Aw, why couldn't it be? Man I hate when the best things in life leave or are taken away. So sad. I like how you wrote about sad memories as a sunrised giving birth to a new day. It was like (to me at least) that even something as promising as a sunrise doesn't mean one is always happy.