Oh, my, gosh, this is amazing!

I love this. Very nice. VERY nice. I agree with the first reviewer. You can get good money for this, and then more people can read them. Honestly, you are very very good.

Thank you for writing this it means alot. I'm the person you wrote this for's sister. Thank you. you're a great writer.

Thank you for writing this it means alot. I'm the person you wrote this for's sister. Thank you. you're a great writer.

Thank you for writing this it means alot. I'm the person you wrote this for's sister. Thank you. you're a great writer.

WHA! I want to be a child again! You make me long for those days of childhood innocence when sorrow and misery and emotional pain had no meaning. The days when our imaginations ruled us. Oh if only, if only I could be a child again. Hmm...I think I just go any idea...
Hawke

Wow. Wow wow wow wow. I'm thrilled. That was amazing! Thanks for starting my morning off nicely!

beautiful.
Just... yeah, beautiful.
Made me smile
Karasu

i see youre getting into the longer poems format :P lol! still quite amazing work, works for ya just right ;)

that was excellent reading it made it feel as if it was real good job

I love it. Thank you. You are amazing. Go publish a few books, you deserve money for these things.