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Juliet Squared 2004-05-15 . chapter 1
Ah...so true, so true. Exactly what I am going through. I really like this poem; however, I have one suggestion: for the last line, "But I know gone are you" ssound really awkward. Try puting something like "The only thing it's missing is you". Other than that, it's a really fine poem. nice work.
So you're another hardcore band geek...greetings, my friend. Band is my life. To show how obsessed I am...all my best friends play an instrument, I go insane if I don't practice every day, and I am confidant to a DRUM MAJOR (oddnes...considering I am just a froshie :P) Yurp- that's Jaxie for ya...and I am going through the 'moving on from love' process as it appears you are too. Sigh...
OK I need to stop rambling. But I am sure glad I found your account- comforting to know I am not the only crazed person out there.
Saiai 2004-04-23 . chapter 1
Aw, man I can so relate to that. Very sad and nicely written.
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