Nicely written with really vivid descriptions.
I liked. give us more.
I can't find a single bad thing to say about it and that is bloody rare for me.
Damn have to say something bad or this will just upset my day.
um.
A ha. It's too short. I want more, give me more.
:P
Sam.
Ps. If you get a chance, could you r/r my posts? Looking for some inteligent feed back.
Cheers.

It's short, but I figured it merits a review.
Well, there isn't much that happens, not enough for me to hardly get any basis for this story, but it's pretty cool. It's artistically written as well as very realistic. This Hawke character sounds interesting, too. Update quick!