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| black leather 2005-11-30 ch 4, | Brilliant idea for the story! I love it. |
| vampindelibleink 2005-01-04 ch 1, | Good prologue. I suggest putting the injuries from the other bullet wounds in para four (leave the number 'twelve' in para six - the sentence is neat as it is). |