amazing.. i love the depth to it, the play on the word rain...

Neat lil' play on words you did. Rain is kind of symbolic for gloom, right? The word reign refers to ruling, and rulers have power...power corrupts; thus, power can be connected to rain.
This is really cool, I like it! _

The word "reign" never had any real worth or opinon in my mind before I read this. I don't know why it does now, but for some reason... Meh...
You're a musician, eh? Well, judging from your writting, you've definitely got talent. I love that bit of personification.
I hope that all goes well with you in the future.