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Reviews For: Is Life Still Worth Living?

JetX66
2004-07-08
ch 1,
life is not worth living as the way you write it :D
i have the same feelings as u do too! but i express it very differerntly in writing.
when you feel down,
everything will go wrong.
listen to a song,
and try to be calm.
dont be dumb,
put down the bomb.
try to be positive,
it's hard to live through life negative.
:D, i know it doesn't rhym 100%, but hey i just did it for this review! you can check out some of my poems, and mayb you will find that ITS NOT JUST U
Peace
evilduckish666
2004-04-24
ch 1,
intreesting. i liked it
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