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| Silentwriter9 2004-11-24 ch 1,   | I like it... never thought that a vmapire could die from too pure blood very interesting concept.Good Job*Silent Writer* |
| Blackening the Ivy 2004-08-23 ch 1, | *laughs* i like that, it's an interesting take on blood and innocence with vamps. ...do u smell the death? it's in the air... |
| Endless Nightmares 2004-06-07 ch 1, | Well, hmm. This is a bit graphic, not sure a PG rating, but its up to you. Overall, nice job. |
| Fabian Cortez 2004-05-20 ch 1, | Very nicely conceived; with a great twist. Well Done Keep Writing. F.C |
| A Beautiful Nightmare 2004-05-02 ch 1, | Enchanting! Reminds me of the Phantom of the Opera but diffrently... It gave me the shivers at the end when he stopped drinking... well done... |
| Rosemarry Underhill 2004-04-28 ch 1, | That was good. A little fast, maybe put in a couple more lines of the urge to kill or something. The last two lines are great! I like it. @->--Marry |
| happy-go-lucky (lazy to log... 2004-04-26 ch 1, | lookie i reviewed! yes that poem is kick **! i do need to get a new topic to write poems in..but hey! It's just the silliest inspirations that get to my "small-brain" ^^ Happy-Go-Lucky! ^-^ |
| TasteofRevenge 2004-04-24 ch 1, | O.O That was good. I liked the ending...DIE VAMPIRE! DIE! *ahem* sorry, been watching too much Buffy. (I really like vampires, so don't get me wrong) |
| Prince of Mirkwood 2004-04-24 ch 1, | very interesting how he couldn't handle her blood. most of the time we don't get to see something like this in the movies and stuff... nice job! =) |